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Thesis : People should make desicions quickly because emergency situations require quick decisions, people can save the time to prepare their goal, and peopla can develop their results.

support 1 : emergency situations require quick decisions

support 2 : people can make their time to prepare something

support 3 :  peopla can develop their results.

I only agree with some part of support ideas. I agree with that in case of emergency, people should make a quick decision. However, i have a opposed oppinion that a quick decision could causes bad results, such as human death.

Therefore, i think you have some real good points about your main ideas, but i think you should contain more examples to supports your idea.